| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/15/11 at 06:13 PM i can relate. you5 description is great |
| Posted by Dan Kasten on 01/22/11 at 04:05 PM Very interesting. I love all the images. The last stanza is biting. |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 02/08/11 at 04:28 PM Great phrasing and time to this. So much said here. Great work. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/13/11 at 03:17 PM Perfection is a word I have come to resent. The word "fog" stands out for me - especially as it relates to "physicality" - which is an increasingly painful issue for me as my body's aging process seems to be accelerating. I really don't want to talk about it. Which is why I should. So your poem is VERY meaningful to me at this point and I appreciate its honesty. Thanks, Beautiful. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/14/11 at 12:59 PM Teasing the mind to think a little more deeply about life. It surely is more than physicality. And animosity changes nothing but to one's own detriment. |
