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the ride is worth the wait

by Morgan D Hafele

electro porn
buzzing in my eyes
vibrating visions
spiral down my spine
and-

-inhale-

exhale

-inhale left over
scents on sheets
saved from last night

i touch
you tickle
i bite
you wiggle

and we had never been so twisted.

we fuck with the lights on
because you say that
reading in the dark is bad for your eyes.

you're right like always,
but sometimes
my body
sees you better than my eyes.

01/09/2011

Author's Note: oh sweet delirium. this little piece came about early one morning after a lack of sleep. i slept wonderfully after getting it out.

Posted on 01/10/2011
Copyright © 2025 Morgan D Hafele

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/11/11 at 10:19 PM

Nothing wrong with a little delirium. I really enjoyed this.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/15/11 at 10:17 PM

A clever piece of work, wry humor throughout Morgan. I realy like how you have all the senses working together as is usually the case with sex. The second last stanza is especially brilliant. Your Author's Note nicely sums up the afterglow of orgasm, both physical and literary.

Posted by Anita Mac on 01/24/11 at 05:22 AM

This is a fun sexy read... A rare find, but no surprise it comes from you.

Posted by Laura Doom on 02/27/11 at 11:28 AM

You'll be pleased to know I had to wear a skin suit for reading this :>

Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 03/06/11 at 04:18 AM

Your still kickin a** lol This is sooo deliciously naughty!

Posted by Lori Blair on 01/05/12 at 08:29 PM

Oh..so I forgot how to live until I read this one! lol..great write..thank you!

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