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ssdy (haiku)

by Linda Fuller

old man bows out
bright new baby enters
full diaper sagging

12/27/2010

Author's Note: title derived from ssdd (same sh*t different day) with a nod to Stephen King's Dreamcatcher.

Posted on 12/28/2010
Copyright © 2024 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/28/10 at 03:09 AM

... excellent.....

Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 12/28/10 at 05:09 PM

well done! ~JPP

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/28/10 at 09:29 PM

Heh. Nice.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/29/10 at 06:40 PM

An old (New Years) concept nicely updated into poetry...and even better haiku. Excellent impact Linda.

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