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deep pack

by Kristina Woodhill

deep
white

add to
add to
add to

infinite

stars
falling

earth
magnet

tuesday
night

meet
in the
parking
lot

meet
in the
back
yard

meet
on
the
roof

packed
tight

volks
wagon

bug
world

got to
get in

12/01/2010

Posted on 12/01/2010
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 12/01/10 at 09:14 PM

Cute lady, cute! Do you drive one!

Posted by A. Paige White on 12/02/10 at 02:17 AM

I love how the shape you used compliments the words you chose to express the press... And it made me remember my first car. I loved my little volkswagon superbeatle. Thanks for packing me in for the ride down memory lane. I could park that thing anywhere. Great writing!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 12/04/10 at 10:13 PM

...k-gal, this is some cool, in form and substance.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/02/11 at 08:54 PM

LOL!! Take a deep breath before sliding in!

Posted by James Blaylock on 04/25/11 at 11:19 AM

I adore the style and flow of this piece. It seem to SCREAM... to me LETS GO!

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