Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Stephan Anstey on 11/30/10 at 03:14 AM LOVE that Lori. |
Posted by George Hoerner on 11/30/10 at 02:40 PM A very lovely write Lori which I hope will be followed by many more. I've been to New York and I've been to Montana and though there is a considerable distance between it seems that love can travel where it will. |
Posted by V. Blake on 12/01/10 at 07:20 AM This is certainly unlike anything I have ever read. Definitely nice to see some fresh thinking 'round these parts. Welcome to Pathetic, Lori! |
Posted by Jasmine Sword-Mann on 12/04/10 at 06:46 AM As we all must continue playing. Wonderful write, Lori! So glad to see you here. :) |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/06/10 at 04:39 AM ... wonderful... welcome to Pathetic..... |
Posted by Jim Benz on 12/07/10 at 08:50 PM This is a wonderful poem. |
Posted by Colleen Sperry on 12/09/10 at 11:40 PM nice to read your work again.. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/20/11 at 05:11 PM What a stage you have set here. Well crafted and lingering. Thank you. |
Posted by Jody Pratt on 09/26/12 at 05:41 AM You have a way with words. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/28/13 at 01:46 PM Congrats on POTD! |