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Thanksgiving Afternoon

by Kristina Woodhill

greenhouse tightly skinned
one hole, ground level corner
tip of black cat's tail

juncos hide and seek
black heads flirt, pecking flecked seed
back door mat, feathered

stringless, puffed soaring
one magpie alights on fence
helium cold winds

turkey stock simmers
windows fog, outside unclear
mice burrow closer

letters build, add words
dictionary on table
outside, ice scrabbles

11/26/2010

Author's Note: edit Nov. 19, 2011

Posted on 11/26/2010
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 11/26/10 at 05:52 PM

I love the imagery painted in this Thanksgiving poem.It feels. It smells. It Tastes. Excellent.

Posted by June Labyzon on 11/27/10 at 03:19 AM

a very clear "painting" of a Thanksgiving morn....lovely images......

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 11/27/10 at 05:27 AM

All that was missing was the image of a fog of breath in the crisp Autumn air...You make us see it all, Kristina

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/27/10 at 10:47 PM

These observations are like a big over-stuffed chair...comfy, faniliar, and not at all demanding of anything...Delighted. Thanks.

Posted by David R Spellman on 12/02/10 at 05:29 PM

Wonderful collection of haiku depicting the season - some great imagery!

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