| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/19/10 at 06:23 PM This is fun, but for some maybe a sad truth. Retail is always either feast or famine (with a side order of "treeless cracklings." Delighted. Thanks. |
| Posted by Don Matley on 11/19/10 at 09:45 PM I like this work. I like the economy of your words.
You paint images with quick short strokes and with little paint. Love "Dervish the pedestrian". Very nice pace. Fun to read aloud.
merci bien |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 11/19/10 at 11:54 PM an overage of busy bodies turned loose. And the real chaos has yet to begin. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/20/10 at 02:16 AM The two month rush has begun and you hit it on the nail's head. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/20/10 at 05:20 AM Perfect description. You remind me to be grateful in my window seat. Perfectly. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 11/21/10 at 11:29 AM A frenetic foretelling by festival of the lexical -- forza cadenza Kristina... |
