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Let Me In
by Rebecca BowenPeople tend to hide behind their eyes,
Yet I can see right through that.
You can't fool me.
I can see right through what you're trying to pull.
Saying everything's ok,
Yet you're wishing you'd just die and go away.
Let me in.
I wont hurt you.
I promise.
I'm not gonna sit here and lie to you.
Tell you I know how you feel if I really don't.
If I say that I care,
Belive me, I do. 11/01/2010 Posted on 11/04/2010
Copyright © 2024 Rebecca Bowen
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/05/10 at 03:49 AM ... quite poignant..... |
| Posted by Timothy Wilson on 07/08/11 at 04:25 AM You pinned colorfuly do much with so little.I love the topic because it's such a common issue that we face as individuals when we begin to build new bridges and reach out with communication, love, friendship, etc. to another human being, and I love your take and feelings on it, portreying your frustraition brilliantly. I could feel exactly what you felt when writing this even if I had not been there at one time or another myself. Beauno it's a very enjoyable read. thumbs up :) |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/25/11 at 01:37 PM I can see why this was posted as POTD, it's brilliant, I love the simplicity of the words that mean so much more than first glance. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/25/11 at 05:11 PM Thank you for this beautiful poem. |
| Posted by Amy Manning on 10/25/11 at 11:18 PM i love the honesty in the emotion expressed. it carries across perfectly. |
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