| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/03/10 at 03:10 PM Insight for miles and just as much creativity. Really enjoyed this. |
| Posted by V. Blake on 11/03/10 at 04:27 PM "Where the path of choice
Has an element of indecision" Well, that about sums it up for me.
For real though--everything Gabe said is spot on. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 11/04/10 at 01:59 AM If this poem reflects life's experiences(based on your stated beliefs on poetry origins), then I wish you the best and hope it works out.But if the destination is the same, then what does it matter? This poem poses hard thought provoking questions. (and very well written) |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 11/04/10 at 03:02 PM I wasn't able to respond to your message and I don't want you to think I am ignoring you.I'll explain later....it is amazing what an image can spawn!(I do appreciate the explanation to my query) :) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/04/10 at 03:52 PM There is an interesting mix of the timid human worrying and maybe just wondering about the next step one takes, and the concept of fate. I, too, and not sure how the last line fits here, unless you speak of the ultimate Destination meaning death. The first stanza is lovely - I am a big fan of northern sea oats, but do not know if this is the same thing. I like the use of the word "Frozen" - in that phrase, and can relate to those moments of indecision with so many choices at hand. Thanks for this. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/07/10 at 06:21 PM ...james, a tall-stepper, this piece of ooomph of life; heavy. |
