| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/14/10 at 06:04 PM as one who oft finds himself horribly awake with his dreams, and that trembling and terribly suffering organ I empathize with you words and all they suggest. welcome aboard. |
| Posted by Drew May on 10/14/10 at 07:54 PM I really love the image you created with the words "coagulated blood". Fits very well with the atmosphere. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/14/10 at 08:03 PM Welcome to the party. This is a hell of a good way of saying hello. Nice work. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 10/14/10 at 09:49 PM Yes, I echo the welcomes, Tessa. And I love that first stanza...a lot. Sets the tone well! |
| Posted by V. Blake on 10/14/10 at 10:02 PM Excellent first poem, Tessa! Welcome to Pathetic--I look forward to seeing more from you. That first stanza is as brutal as they come. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 10/15/10 at 12:15 AM Storms have a way of passing but what they leave in their wake may be worse than the storm itself. I also welcome you to the pathetic playground. Write on... |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/18/10 at 07:48 PM ... wel done, welcome to Pathetic..... |
