| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by V. Blake on 09/25/10 at 05:54 PM Lots of clever lines here. The split between each couplet made me go back a couple of times to reread the line before. Great stuff as always. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/25/10 at 09:47 PM ...all that vince said and more[i'm older, so there] kristina, i wheeled into this one like a stop 'n go and got full-grocery. a zigity zag, nicely done. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 09/26/10 at 08:33 PM Just think what a postal clerk knows about each of us in a small town. Valentines day, Christmas, etc... A fine write m'lady. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/27/10 at 10:22 PM ... excellent..... |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 09/28/10 at 08:07 PM I love how you paint a picture of a game (some games have serious conclusions) someone plays with their job. Could be he's marking the laughers to meet a goal he privately set to help mark the time. You definitely put me there in line watching and waiting... perfectly done. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/08/11 at 02:39 PM Love this poem. I have made friends with a number of postal clerks in my home town through the years. Some of them a real delight!
You start with a playful mood which changes to quite poignancy. One to go on my favorites list. |
