| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/24/10 at 04:50 AM James, I love that wrote about wildflowers. I think there is a TON of potential imagery here. I'd love to see you take the literal observations and feelings and express them metaphorically onto canvas. I think that would be a PERFECT stretch for this poem! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/24/10 at 07:21 PM The form is what's so engaging. It gives the language and tone a great line to follow. Nice work indeed. |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 08/26/10 at 02:56 PM It almost sounds like you're channeling Wordsworth here James. Very nice. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/28/10 at 08:54 PM I enjoyed this very much. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 08/30/10 at 07:35 PM Beautiful! |
