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Triad (III)
by Anita MacI’ve got some bad head-space lately,
and rearranging the furniture
isn’t clearing it this time.
And you’re so clean.
I’ll feed this need to run
and know that
I’ll never find you,
but maybe next time
We’ll be around.
08/05/2010 Author's Note: I kind of feel like the titles maybe aren't enough. At the same time, they're kind of perfect. Any thoughts?
Posted on 08/05/2010
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/06/10 at 02:10 PM Hi Anita. In answer to your question, aside from the obvious number of three, you might want to expand on what connotation the word "Triad" means to you. I found this and the previous two poems intriguing and thought provoking. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 08/08/10 at 09:37 PM what is it about moving furniture around that usually seems to make things so much better, for me it's either that or cutting my hair off... i put the 3 pieces together in note pad so i could read them as one. i think the titles are appropriate for these pieces and they all flow together very well and i certainly could not have thought of anything better. on top of all of that i must echo chris because i also think what he said. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 08/14/10 at 12:24 AM I don't know; I'd probably go with something like --
[Triad] - the feeding, - the seeding, - the ceding
but then it's a futile gesture, attempting to improve upon perfection :> |
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