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by Charlie Morgan

spider's lazy-day
hurries the moon's
nap

07/10/2010

Posted on 07/10/2010
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/11/10 at 12:36 PM

oh how the lazy days always seem to disappear so fast

Posted by A. Paige White on 07/11/10 at 06:33 PM

LOVE this!!! Definitely my pick for POTD. Got one about snake handlers? lol, sorry, just watched a show on the history channel (hillbilly: the real story) and of course, they had to show the churches up here that are snake handlers. I never knew where "redneck" came from. Still the only state in America where you can practice your snake handling legally, roflol. anywho... spiders and snakes. Lovin how you write, Chaz!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/11/10 at 07:40 PM

This is a goodd example of haiku. You say a lot in a ecomy of words. Nice work.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/12/10 at 05:21 PM

Oooooo... what a great haiku - so nature-noticing, easy, and lovely. Thanks Charlie.

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