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episodic life (senryu)

by Glenn Currier

am I just feeding
while waiting the final bell
an episodic life

07/05/2010

Posted on 07/05/2010
Copyright © 2025 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/05/10 at 03:17 PM

Very nice.

Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/05/10 at 04:12 PM

Pithy - I'm rather afraid I'm doing just that...

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/06/10 at 04:10 AM

i often wonder similar thoughts...probably best not to dwell on though.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/06/10 at 06:02 PM

With just 3 lines, you summed up life. Excellent work.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/09/10 at 01:24 AM

Effective means of getting the reader to see life in episodes even though you only use three lines. Motion picture imagery.

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