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Doesn't It
by Joe CramerDoesn't it feel good
just as it should?
Do you now long
to be with me,
near to me, dear to me?
It is quite clear to me
how much I love you.
This much, I know 'tis true,
I am so in love with you.
Doesn't it feel good,
doesn't it? 07/03/2010 Posted on 07/03/2010
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/03/10 at 09:35 PM I get the message; the longing, the hurt. Wonderful write. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/03/10 at 09:50 PM This sounds like the refrain of a song... maybe you will write more... I get a mixture of joy, longing, and a reaching out, a beckoning. It sings to me - I hope the loved one has eyes, ears and heart for it. Nice one, Joe. |
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