| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Sarah Brookes on 07/01/10 at 01:14 AM Powerful stuff. I get this lingering sense of cloying sweetness, tempered nicely by that particularly harsh final x-ray image. Great! |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 07/01/10 at 01:56 AM Oh damn...this is wonderful...and I now realize I will likely fail on an epic level in my own attempt!! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 07/01/10 at 12:44 PM A very nice write lady. But I would like to think that all life's experiences 'the good, the bad, and the ugly' are equally important for us to grasp and take in. Again a good write. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/01/10 at 03:11 PM Ok, this was so good, I didn't realize it's form - clever, you are.... love the implied "z" and got a kick out of the "ovoid". Thanks! |
| Posted by Roger J Kenyon on 11/17/11 at 02:12 AM A fine write Linda Fuller in for me a difficult form. Thank you. |
