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carbon dating (senryu)

by Linda Fuller

we’re carbon dating
rubbing templates, stenciling
copies of past loves

06/28/2010

Posted on 06/28/2010
Copyright © 2024 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Elaine on 06/29/10 at 12:26 AM

Dating ourselves, as we're rating ourselves, this too, will expire in time.

Posted by George Hoerner on 06/29/10 at 12:43 AM

. Nice write lady. I have yet to write something about each of mine. But there are a few things and some apply to more than one. I go over them so many times it is one of my neuroses.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/30/10 at 12:06 AM

...gooood 'un linda fuller...'loves', with all expecting 'lives'...cool i say, the whole enchilada.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/02/10 at 03:14 PM

I like the double meaning in the title; ironic in that you're not dating past loves in the traditionl sense. Nicely starts off the piece, concise, well stated, with a clever mild humor to it as well.

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