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carbon dating (senryu)
by Linda Fullerwe’re carbon dating
rubbing templates, stenciling
copies of past loves
06/28/2010
Posted on 06/28/2010
Copyright © 2025 Linda Fuller
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| Posted by Therese Elaine on 06/29/10 at 12:26 AM Dating ourselves,
as we're rating ourselves, this too,
will expire in time. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 06/29/10 at 12:43 AM . Nice write lady. I have yet to write something about each of mine. But there are a few things and some apply to more than one. I go over them so many times it is one of my neuroses. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/30/10 at 12:06 AM ...gooood 'un linda fuller...'loves', with all expecting 'lives'...cool i say, the whole enchilada. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/02/10 at 03:14 PM I like the double meaning in the title; ironic in that you're not dating past loves in the traditionl sense. Nicely starts off the piece, concise, well stated, with a clever mild humor to it as well. |
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