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his quiet is so loud

by Charlie Morgan

somewhere sits a man filling a page
with phonemes; joining apples and
triangles, getting them to fit.

i yearn for his shoulder to look over;
his sniffle, a habit of his for years.
seeing the language beaten, submitting.

he sees a mountain on fire at night;
sees the world in flames' shadows.
he's that way, a way so benevolent.

the world: bigger, stronger, pushier
allows his grin to be so distant, yet,
in memory, only a thought away from me.

i wonder about his knapsack. is it large
enough for his travels, small enough for
his stature, distance in comfort of travel.

a fire of life walks with him though; others
stamp it out, for fear. he bears the heat.
and is warmed by the chair of poetic Masters.

his silence, you can hear. it is deafening.



06/24/2010

Posted on 06/24/2010
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 06/24/10 at 04:00 PM

It takes a mster to know a master Charlie. So you write about what you know best. A very nice piece sir.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/24/10 at 09:22 PM

I love this. You're right- silence is deafening. I HATE silence.

Posted by Linda Fuller on 06/25/10 at 03:01 AM

i will toast this pome with a cup of tea...

Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/26/10 at 05:08 PM

Methinks this master is familiar. The third stanza brilliantly captures him. Yes, truly benevolent. I know not many who measure up to him in that department. And the title speaks our sadness mixed with the joy of remembering and rereading. Bless you, Brother.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 06/26/10 at 11:25 PM

well, i haven't seen mountains on fire, but it makes me want a shot of whiskey to feel the fire in my belly. like george said, it takes a master to know one. please, write on sir!

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