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Soapy Salvation

by Anastasia Shows

We bathed in our lavatory lagoon,
and baptized each other in suds.
I shampooed Jesus Christ
into your scalp,
rinse.
repeat.
and as the conditioner sat in your hair,
detangling and smoothing
away your worries,
you whispered the beatitudes to me
and shaved my legs ever so
gently.

Meanwhile, i brushed my hair
absent-minded and made
crosses with the strays that
i shed.

A sudden slip,
a cut
drop.
drip.
of blood into the water,
and you scampered off to
retrieve a bandage for
my wound.

you shrouded me in cotton
as the pink water drained.
drip.
another drop of blood
for our sins.

06/07/2010

Posted on 06/08/2010
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Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Elaine on 06/08/10 at 10:50 PM

A tribute to shared intimacies, the ritual of bathing being one of the most private -to be able to share such a thing is quite wondrous...and you are to be envied!

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