| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 06/08/10 at 02:10 AM I feel like something you dwell on surfaced in a way that made it almost light and smokey. That's not right... but, you know, something like that. Ever the cynic, but I like this. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 06/08/10 at 07:43 PM A good write Morgan. But one is never free of Catholic guilt. It permeates the soul and though one sometimes forgets one is never free. It is carried to the grave like like a silver knife in the heart. |
| Posted by Rowan Luis on 06/10/10 at 05:14 PM I read it to loud PJ Harvey, which was perfect. feels heavy. i hope you will feel free |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 06/12/10 at 06:27 PM Sounds like you've got this inner battle going on that we're only getting surface scratch of. I relate to this because I was once Catholic and know, I'm just a misfit. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/16/10 at 03:11 AM I like how you started off looking inward and then expand to the world around you. Colorful language, entertaining stuff despite its obvious darkness. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/14/10 at 11:43 PM Yes... a sinking feeling on the Planet Titanic. Lies, Leary, religion, and impending doom; there really isn't anything more to say except well done. |
