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doubt be casted, thoughts be null

by Joe Khan

untenable and pure,
we must go there.


charge on through
space and time
to that vision heard
in the water where
sparks expose their
intentions, and suns-
shrinking to notes-
flow from our fingers
in a river of perfect
harmony.

06/03/2010

Posted on 06/03/2010
Copyright © 2025 Joe Khan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/03/12 at 03:02 PM

I really like the fluid feeling to this POTD. Thanks!

Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 10/08/12 at 07:30 PM

Transcendence into a reality defined only by self-absolution and the energy of being. Sounds a lot like poetry.

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