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thomas at the starbucks by David Hill
Franny and Zooey
and me,
watching
behind raybans.
ankles crossed,
boots on the rail,
a bleached-bone chair
back on rickety legs.
(poseur)
five finches
flutter and chirp,
pick at cake crumbs.
an enormous suv arrives,
and they scatter.
(oil spill)
a man in seersucker slacks,
loafers with no socks,
whistles,
discreetly drops his stir stick
on the pavement.
(care)
a bumble bee on his back
rights himself repeatedly,
buzzes round most crazily.
shall I kill him?
(hole in sky)
a glitter “diva”
on the phone, loudly,
something about a cruise,
some new clothes.
(third world)
the bee goes silent.
turns out,
i should’ve killed him.
(too late)
Salinger went silent in 65,
then more so this past winter.
(everything dies)
i watch for Seymour’s
“Fat Lady,”
but it is so dark here.
(save us)
i cannot see the Christ
in them,
(doubt)
nor in me.
05/03/2010 Author's Note: god bless the weary skeptic
Posted on 05/04/2010 Copyright © 2026 David Hill
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/04/10 at 02:11 AM a very interesting piece. i really like the way you tied each stanza to the parenthesis it adds an extra dimension to the poem, brings it to a deeper life. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/04/10 at 04:56 PM Great piece! I love the small scenes revealed, the parenthetical asides, and that deadly ending. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/04/10 at 04:57 PM Had to come back - just now got the title... well done.. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 05/04/10 at 06:31 PM Very well done David! |
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