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Complaint Of The Day

by Joan Serratelli

After 40 years
of smoking
and NEVER doing it right
Someone finally
told me how to

Moral of the story:
I did it once
am totally addicted
to nicotin
and cannot do
it again

SOMEONE
please get me a gun
and shoot me
...NOW!

04/20/2010

Author's Note: TRUE STORY

Posted on 04/20/2010
Copyright © 2024 Joan Serratelli

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 04/20/10 at 07:24 PM

... brilliant.....

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/20/10 at 09:32 PM

You are a unique individual, my first smoking non-smoker. I think you deserve some kind of medal - one for trying and two for avoiding addiction in spite of yourself. I know no one else who can say that. amazing.... :)

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 04/21/10 at 01:58 AM

Unfiltered wit and wisdom, Joan...smoking, as they say!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/22/10 at 08:08 PM

Some of us suffer that deeper addiction of just trying to get from day to day...extremes live all around us. You are a good fighter, know it or not. Thanks.

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