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by Kristina Woodhill

I would race Bruce
to the end,

but April wrangles
with my words;

this vernal season
ropes me to rake and
and hoe,

begs poking fingers
into worm caves

placing potential
at the proper depth;

I cover everything
now, smothering words;

my ear to ground,
I hear conversations
below -

gophers grumble along
perpendicular paths

(a metallic click
sets the light

at the end of the tunnel
and waits

and waits - eternity beckons)

microrhizae buddy up
to roots

I'll scratch your back
you scratch mine;


weeds get their armor on,
extending swords,

drilling tap roots
to China;

they see me patrolling,
they do not fear my kind;

up top,
words stumble,

confused by sun's
equanimity, while I,

I confess to stealing
the sun
for my garden's heat,

shameless
in my rain dance
gyrations,

secretly whispering promises
to the waxing moon;

knowing the poetry
about to burst

through earth's tentative cracks
will fill spring's pages

in a pop-up book extravaganza,

pushing dusty,
useless words

to the side

04/07/2010

Posted on 04/07/2010
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 04/08/10 at 02:12 AM

One must have their priorities straight and it seems you do. I on the other hand put paying bills ahead of writing. I have no sense what so ever. Good write lady.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/08/10 at 02:17 PM

The form in this is just perfect, lending itself nicely to your voice.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/08/10 at 04:37 PM

Yes; indeed you do have your priorities straight.A wonderful write- as always!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/08/10 at 06:16 PM

From a poetic garded so springs the dance of earth and life! Reverse that and it would apply as well! Delighted. Thanks

Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 04/08/10 at 07:10 PM

Love it! The garden metaphor and the imagery are very well-done. Glad I was of some inspiration to you.... d:-)

Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 04/08/10 at 07:10 PM

...and I just realized the pun of the title. Excellent!

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 04/11/10 at 09:29 PM

Lively spring (w)rite! ...and I see Peter rabbit scurrying to the potting shed...

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