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"Dizzied"
by Max PhineasThe product of my
sunburned delirium
is that
truth flies like a banana.
and my Lies
taste like chocolate. 04/04/2010 Posted on 04/05/2010
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 04/05/10 at 03:05 AM Verr fresh descriptions and metaphors. I like how you describe truth and lies. They giva an all new meaning and perspective on both. Great write! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 04/05/10 at 01:03 PM When words taste so sweet one must wonder what generates the taste. Good write. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/06/10 at 09:33 PM That's a sharp image to tack on the wall. Well done. |
| Posted by Gregory R Schelske on 06/16/12 at 10:45 PM Simply profound...or is it profoundly simple? Either way, you won me over with this. |
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