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Idle Hands

by Shannon McEwen

In the lonely echo of the night
The spot next to me
Is empty

Like my hand
Where it sometimes
Wraps around

Moves ever
So slow
Up and down

your brain.

03/29/2010

Posted on 03/30/2010
Copyright © 2024 Shannon McEwen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jared Fladeland on 03/30/10 at 05:58 AM

ha. GREAT tension in this bit

Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 04/03/10 at 06:33 AM

this could be taken a few ways, but maybe i'm overanalyzing. either way...nice job of drawing a couple of saucy photos with one or two words...wait a minute. i'm doing a terrible job of commenting on this poem. i should stop. i'll just say with little verbage...you've got my attention. ;p wow...i'm tired.

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