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Annex

by Erik Jensen

Me? I am never enough.

It's never enough to, say, know.
I used to borrow words and wait until
they were forgotten by their owners
and too much of me to belong elsewhere.

Later, I moved against ideas - swallowing them
and swirling them in me until their borders lapsed.
Delicious but only momentarily filling.
I sank my teeth into each and licked my fingers clean.

Now, I hunt context, a whisper soft
photograph flash speculation.
Gone and gone forever,
only to reinvent and explode again.

Never enough.

03/20/2010

Author's Note: Rip me apart on this one.

Posted on 03/21/2010
Copyright © 2024 Erik Jensen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlotte Smith on 03/21/10 at 05:37 PM

I love poetry about language itself, so it's no surprise I like this one. If I would change anything, it would be to delete the first and last lines...but I love the idea of borrowing words and swallowing ideas. Appropriate but unexpected :)

Posted by Samiah Haque on 07/07/11 at 01:24 AM

this poem is beautiful, and if a poem can be a perfect thing, then this is that poem. every word is honored with a purpose it fulfills, completing it feels like the end of a road that is not an end really...speechless, and lovely. thank you

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