|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/19/10 at 03:55 PM|
I like story-poems. Here, you've written an exceptionally strong one that curls into my mind. And I love this. I noticed it yesterday, and it stayed with me through the night.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/19/10 at 10:53 PM|
I can strongly relate to this. The manic state of creating new poetry, or any kind of art for that matter. Aptly expressed Maria.
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 03/21/10 at 03:30 PM|
|Posted by Julie Adams on 03/25/10 at 02:49 PM|
a wonderful flow and intricate imagery for a topic so near to all us poets/artists when working on our craft...I love that the rhyme doesn't distract but rather rocks the reader into dreams of their own with each new image...well done, peace, jewels