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Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/13/10 at 07:04 PM From your pen to G-d's ear! I'm so looking forwards to Spring. I saw a robin yesterday and smiled- time to get out my Mini-dresses! Yes; this Gramdmother wears Mini-dresses- can't wait! Cheerful write. Thanks for brightening this rainny cold (ish) Saturday! Well written, as always! |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/13/10 at 08:07 PM Yes, it's blossom by blossom, and other seemingly trivial things that Spring begins...and mighty contests are given rise! Excellent verse. Thank you. |
Posted by Kimberly Bowen on 03/13/10 at 08:14 PM I love how you opened with "There!"...I felt this moment just the other day...yay Spring! |
Posted by A. Paige White on 03/14/10 at 02:38 AM I've seen it too! We have a bush/tree at the corner of the house in full bloom and I swear I want to hang a hammock in it. While the nights are cool and mosquitoes a hazy memory... Thank you for adding more joy in the greenery I have been adoring. |
Posted by Julie Adams on 03/15/10 at 03:34 PM A lovely little write here girly, love the hope and the humor embedded in the imagery and delivery, ur such a talent!! peace, jewels xoxox |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/17/10 at 03:19 PM Yes! and I zoom awake in glee to how you opened this - like a proclamation..."There!" |