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in need of a teddy beR
by Shannon McEwenIn gloomy darkness
The vague sound of rubber
Splash by on wet roads
Chubby raindrops knock
Against chilly window panes
Echo through my heart
Every resonance
Kick starts already fragile nerves
Stomps air out of lungs
Until the pressure
Constricts all rational thought
Where now fear remains
03/11/2010 Posted on 03/12/2010
Copyright © 2026 Shannon McEwen
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 03/13/10 at 07:25 AM chubby raindrops? ahhh...that's good. softens the poem a bit in my opinion, but it really blasts against those windows eh? this is short...but appropriately so. this is needy/fetal position poetry. hungry for love/affection/companionship...not afraid to admit it. well-written. word choice delicious like warm pie. fine fine fine. |
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