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three hay(na)ku
by Jim BenzVallejo
stretching wide
along the saltmarsh
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dawnlit
flute invites
a junco's trill
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eating
soup until
the spoons chime 03/10/2010 Author's Note: hay(na)ku is a new poetry form, created by poet Eileen Tabios. These are my first attempts.
Posted on 03/11/2010
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/11/10 at 02:56 AM love, love, love the third one! |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 03/16/10 at 12:52 AM form
you lie
beneath the radar
hainaku chains to decorate the page :) Thinking about the possibilities of combining forward/reverse reflections... |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 03/25/10 at 06:34 PM these are all simply stunning...a canvas each their own...ur a pleasure to take in always, a favorite and inspiring for me...peace, jewels xoxox |
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