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Putting the Piracy Back in Conspiracy

by V. Blake

somewhere along the line
a crew of passive-aggressive trolls
gathered together underground
and adopted "live and let live"
as their society's motto.

these beasts would be responsible
for torching all the road signs
that once directed us toward allegory,
putting totems in their stead
to mock our best intentions
from every corner of the earth.

but the real damage of these tricks
made no move to reveal itself
until both acts somehow managed
to strip themselves of irony.

02/26/2010

Posted on 02/27/2010
Copyright © 2024 V. Blake

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/27/10 at 07:17 PM

Indeed, moral self-infatuation has its own corruptions. With time, almost every principle of life acquires an ironic echo, a sort of cackling aftermath. While the joy of piracy may be out of vouge, the zest of smuggling lives on! Thanks.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/27/10 at 07:59 PM

ah, but there is no conspiracy.... ;), it is simply to get a rise out of the boat

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/27/10 at 11:04 PM

...whatever a quatrain is this is something like that, heavy and i dropped it a couple of times, my mentality and all, this is such a doozy, it's a square dance of awarenesses of the gooey-ness of 'everybody'...includes me/you...there should be a square when we're heralded for realizing what Pogo did long ago, we met the enemy and he is us.

Posted by Amie Golda on 03/01/10 at 01:54 AM

I remember an argument from a Philiosphy class that we were taught to "dismember" and disprove. The argument was that truth is relative. The answer: if all truth is relative then even this argument cann ot be considered an absolute truth because it is also relative. You capture the essence of that argument so well here. Irony indeed. Great write.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 03/02/10 at 10:16 PM

When all is said and done there will be more said than done and I will simply digress and point to Chas and Amie and say "ditto".

Posted by JD Clay on 03/04/10 at 03:27 AM

I think what makes this poem whole and complete is the unique use of language. It’s an intriguing story line that keeps the reader guessing while guiding them down the poetic path. I really like the title too. It sets the stage for wanting and needing more, like screaming, read on. Then the poem backs it all up with flavorful trope that wows the senses.

Posted by Michael Smith on 03/04/10 at 04:19 AM

This work speaks for itself. It needs no bolstering. A feel "learned" after having read it. Thanks for sharing, Vince.

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