| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/25/10 at 08:43 PM ...jeff, cool write, like the personification of Love and you're getting some licks in on her...she is a formidable opponent...you seem to be up to the challenge, and it's a challenge... |
| Posted by Beth K Hannah on 02/27/10 at 06:01 PM this was such a good read...i feel like love's purposely screwed me over as well. haha |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/27/10 at 07:39 PM Great fight scene! Loved the whole conversation here. Thank you,. |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 03/01/10 at 01:33 PM Love, the pursuit of and the practice, definitely contains an element of the violent, the frustrated and the thwarted...perfectly natural you'd want to two-step with it like any good romantic pugilist! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 03/01/10 at 04:18 PM This was so entertaining and yet sad at the same time. I really enjoyed the way you and 'love' went at it. Many of us have gone a few rounds with Love! Excellent poem Jeff. |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 03/02/10 at 06:55 AM Haha I've never seen love so violent. But I guess in reality it is actually as intense as a boxing match. The ending I found a little bit emo as it sounded like the cliches they recite. But in conjecture to the poem I guess it worked well. And I'm not one who follows boxing, but this was indeed entertaining. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/28/10 at 04:08 AM Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by E. A. Pugh on 08/28/10 at 05:50 PM leaving them ringingleaving them ringingleaving them ringingleaving them ringingleaving them ringingleaving them ringingleaving them ringingleaving them ringinginginginginginging!
Great poem ! |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/28/10 at 06:15 PM Inspiring and wonderful! Excellent choice for POTD! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 08/28/10 at 06:59 PM I completely ...throughly enjoyed reading this again. Great choice for POTD! |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 08/28/10 at 09:32 PM Excellent POTD - I found myself chuckling even with a wry smile. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/29/10 at 12:16 AM JPP!!! Congrats on POTD!!!! A wonderful write!!! |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 10/31/10 at 12:42 AM I am an old 30--I love that line! Great write. |
