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Melt

by Julie Adams



He whispers in my ear
I love you
and like a warm chocolate truffle
I melt a little inside

02/24/2010

Author's Note: Thanks, Erin, for title suggestion!

Posted on 02/24/2010
Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/24/10 at 03:44 PM

Perfect.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/24/10 at 07:00 PM

... brilliant Jewels, simply brilliant.....

Posted by Erin Eymard on 02/25/10 at 02:41 PM

I <3 truffles! But I also love the subtle beauty of this poem.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/25/10 at 08:45 PM

This is beautiful. Love has no other desire but to fulfill itself...and should melt! And sing to the night and wake with a winged heart. Just lovely. Thanks.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 02/26/10 at 11:08 PM

Isn't love delish? I think so!

Posted by Alisa Js on 03/25/10 at 09:08 AM

Aloha... This one is sweet! In every context...thank you for sharing ... alisa ;-)

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