| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 02/24/10 at 03:00 AM Beautiful! Love the metaphor. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/24/10 at 06:10 AM hmmm...very few people or poets can make the simple utterance of a name an act of sensuality. You did here, Mel....and I hope whoever keeps your name that safe knows how lucky they are. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/25/10 at 08:37 PM Always, always, the mouth must keep silent to hear hearts speak...this is a mosel to savor. Thanks. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/17/10 at 09:29 PM this is divine simply divine and safe |
