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Thoughts immediately before submission

by Richard Colinson

This story is utterly lifeless
And it makes no sense

I didn't make this up
Someone else made this up
I just read it
Now I've stolen it

You see this is how
The whole thing should be rewritten
But the deadline's moments off
And it's too late

I don't have a hope off winning
Why do I bother entering
It'll be embarrassing

Too late now to ask
For moral support
What needs doing will be done

Fill that form, push the button
Who knows, maybe I've won?

02/15/2010

Posted on 02/15/2010
Copyright © 2024 Richard Colinson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/10/10 at 04:01 PM

Hey, you tried. You answered the creative spirit. I am impressed with your daily poem writes. I will check out a few others. Thanks for your good example of dedication and discipline.

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