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squawk.

by Jared Fladeland

walking through the desert,
i spot two vultures
tearing apart a corpse.

i hesitate,
they are picking
apart
the
bones.

there is something strange-familiar
about this,
as i narrow my eyes to focus in,
as if i am staring at an old friend
once forgotten.

The vultures squabble away
with a piece of heart,
allowing me to step beside the dead,

and i realize:

it is me.
and the jaw, half open,
is smiling


because it knows.

02/14/2010

Posted on 02/14/2010
Copyright © 2026 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 02/15/10 at 02:24 AM

A good write Jared. It reminds me of a Berman movie I've seen a couple times. I believe it was "The Magician". Are you familiar with it?

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/15/10 at 04:27 PM

Ha! Jared, you have gone and gotten yourself eaten!

Posted by Amie Golda on 02/19/10 at 03:20 AM

This does remind me of those ghost movies with twists like that. But the way you put this is poetic, witty and bears a lot of implicit meaning, enough for your readers to sink their jaws into.

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