Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Richard Colinson on 02/10/10 at 12:01 AM Hehe. Kids these days! |
Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 02/10/10 at 07:18 AM OH... You're a better woman than I. I would without hesitation vacate the premises... I mean... um... couldn't you show him something shiny to distract him and make a run for it? *just making a suggestion* ~N |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/10/10 at 04:08 PM ...therese, this is more than cool, it's a philosophy o' bein'...i laughed on the first read then grinned as i drank it in the second and third, it is values that shouln't clash in a relationship...great write. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/10/10 at 04:24 PM I LOVE this series. Your humor is priceless. PLEASE write more. You say so much with so few words- excellent! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/13/10 at 02:32 PM I think removing the word "in" and just having Raging Excrement would be a better name for a band. In any case, vivid, thought provoking poetic snapshot Therese. |