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Failed Romantic Encounters #12

by Therese Elaine

So...your band has a song called
'Raging in Excrement'...............
yeah...um...check please!

02/09/2010

Author's Note: Why I don't date people younger than myself anymore...

Posted on 02/09/2010
Copyright © 2024 Therese Elaine

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Colinson on 02/10/10 at 12:01 AM

Hehe. Kids these days!

Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 02/10/10 at 07:18 AM

OH... You're a better woman than I. I would without hesitation vacate the premises... I mean... um... couldn't you show him something shiny to distract him and make a run for it? *just making a suggestion* ~N

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/10/10 at 04:08 PM

...therese, this is more than cool, it's a philosophy o' bein'...i laughed on the first read then grinned as i drank it in the second and third, it is values that shouln't clash in a relationship...great write.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/10/10 at 04:24 PM

I LOVE this series. Your humor is priceless. PLEASE write more. You say so much with so few words- excellent!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/13/10 at 02:32 PM

I think removing the word "in" and just having Raging Excrement would be a better name for a band. In any case, vivid, thought provoking poetic snapshot Therese.

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