| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by V. Blake on 02/03/10 at 09:12 PM I just want to point out to those who come after me that I'm responsible for this poet being here. Just sayin'. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/03/10 at 09:17 PM Glad you did. It's badass. |
| Posted by Richard Colinson on 02/03/10 at 09:35 PM That's awesome. Seems like there's a lot in there and you wrestled it down well. |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 02/04/10 at 12:02 AM I train with MMA fighters and HONEY... they got nuth'n on you! Whoa! This was complete submission through grappeling and I bow to your WIN!!! ...and Vince... yah, dude... I think she could take you ;) RAW-Chester! ~N |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/04/10 at 01:20 AM Great! And the self-made woman? |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 02/04/10 at 01:23 AM You definitely emerge victorious Rachel. What a point to drive at and you do it so boldly yet gracefully! I applaude how you were indeed able to subdue the words.
Could you come up with a similar piece for Vince's comment though? ;) |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 02/04/10 at 02:04 AM I hope Vince isn't getting a ten percent cut of you!!! Another amazing piece from your Rachel -I am consistently impressed with your work and the way which you tackle such a wide variety of subject matter, from the whimsical to the serious! |
| Posted by Cassandra Leigh on 02/08/10 at 01:33 AM was this by any chance inspired by Bobbie Carlyle's sculpture? http://selfmademan.bobbiecarlylesculpture.com/index.php
i've seen it, it's amazing. and this piece is also amazing. i can tell it's very meticulously put together. awesome :) |
| Posted by Steve Michaels on 08/07/13 at 04:32 AM Nice write and congrats on POTD |
| Posted by Colleen Sperry on 08/07/13 at 09:14 AM congrats on POTD... loved the poem! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/07/13 at 02:40 PM Congrats on POTD! This slaps hard. Thanks for this. |
