| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by William Brunk on 01/29/10 at 09:33 PM ha...i love this one.
this is why you SHOULD write HAIKU!! |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 01/29/10 at 10:56 PM too funny. I totally agree with Brunk |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 01/29/10 at 11:22 PM Well, honestly, this is why you should write senryu, which I have great difficulty writing. Either way, this is awesome! (First rule of Haiku/Senryu: 5-7-5 is a myth -- don't exceed 17 but always make it as shrt as you can to convey what you're trying to convey)
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| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/29/10 at 11:29 PM ...well, latida, on this one and your so-called long pomes...doll this is too kewl, whatda think, a return? [toooo cool]... |
| Posted by Sarah Wolf on 01/30/10 at 12:45 AM Cute |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/30/10 at 03:48 AM Heheh. I don't think it's true haiku (which, I didn't write true haiku for a long time either...haha!) but it's an adorable thought. |
| Posted by Rachel Bennett on 01/30/10 at 05:36 AM XD Love it. |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 01/30/10 at 07:39 AM muhahahah!!! Evil, funny, sarcastic and PERFECT!!! So, did you check the receipt for an official 'return' policy?... ;) ~N |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/30/10 at 03:41 PM Hilarious! Thanks, Therese! |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 01/31/10 at 04:34 PM HILARIOUS. this is why you're one of my faves. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/31/10 at 05:32 PM :-)) Love it! You said it all! |
| Posted by Jared Fladeland on 02/01/10 at 12:13 AM ha. this was brilliant |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 02/01/10 at 07:05 AM It made me smile, it
Made me laugh, your poem is
Great, and that is that
Authors note: Ok so I guess I just proved I suck more at writing haikus, not that yours sucked...it didn't. |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 02/01/10 at 06:58 PM All kidding aside ( I never laugh, and I can't stand all the giddy comments) this piece is something I would say in the middlle of one of my stories. Great work! :) It has that "well that was a waste of my life" feel to it. I Like that. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 02/01/10 at 07:54 PM haha. i never did like edible undies; too messy. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/11/10 at 11:17 PM perfect |
| Posted by Tom Goss on 07/17/10 at 05:19 PM *SMILE* |
