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Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/27/10 at 03:28 AM I am utterly blown away by your ability to craft like this (and I'm glad I'm not the only one who writes longer pieces!) This is just so compelling and "maturity's learned at too old an age" just kills me -it's a perfect line!! Who cares if you can't play chess when you can write like this! |
Posted by Michael Smith on 01/27/10 at 04:15 AM Do you speak like this in everyday life, Amie? I have to wonder because you're so talented with what I deem "old-fashioned language". And "craft" was the right word from Therese because I don't see anybody gunslinging these words. I know everyone always says this about you but, you are wise beyond your years, youngin'. Stupendous!
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Posted by George Hoerner on 01/27/10 at 01:09 PM Have you been reading some Baudelaire my dear? I somehow feel it sneaking out of the 19th century. This is a fine write. |
Posted by V. Blake on 01/27/10 at 08:58 PM I'm with George, but you knew that already. You write with the weight of centuries upon your pen. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/27/10 at 09:11 PM There is some mighty heavy stuff here and I like how you explore this. It's good to walk on by those who say the young can't do this or can't achieve that. I wish you well in all your ventures. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/29/10 at 04:56 PM I love your word choice. You have unbelievable talent. Excellent job! |
Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 02/03/10 at 08:36 PM Once I pick my jaw up off my desk... I could probably formulate an ovation of some sort to do this piece justice. ...wow!... just amazing and am lost in the fact that its ancient feel for today's modern world. You are a great writer! ~N |