| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 01/18/10 at 11:01 PM Wooo! I like! I like! It is interesting what some sun-bathing or some hot-tub soaking can do for our... sensuality. Very excellent poetic elements here, Clara. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/18/10 at 11:42 PM mmmm.... very nice..... |
| Posted by James Zealy on 01/21/10 at 07:27 PM Even Unplumbed, discovery is everything, don't you agree? An unrealized unfinshed sensuality ready to be found. |
| Posted by Sarah Wolf on 01/23/10 at 10:05 AM Makes me want to blush... |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/24/10 at 08:06 PM And it works!!! This is wonderful because it is so very subtle but so undeniably blatant as well...the fountain bubbling image...nice, very nice!! And it's suddenly warm in here too!!! |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 01/25/10 at 11:30 AM ...great succinct piece...flows so well...desire is a beautiful thing! Kudos & nice to hear about the source of the poem in ur note too :) peace, jewels |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/29/10 at 12:20 AM Oh yes, a very nice write lady. The light of love can add a great deal to our view of life. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/29/10 at 06:00 PM This piece definitely works- again; alot said here. Beautifully crafted- thanks! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/10/10 at 09:58 PM Well, what a loss for that one out there who could be that gentle loving plumber. Enjoyed your playful piece. Ah - for those cool January days. It is already hot in Texas on June 10th. |
