| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 01/15/10 at 09:28 PM well said. it is quite an amazing thing. |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/15/10 at 11:04 PM Awwwwww...*melts* |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 01/16/10 at 01:40 AM Simple.
Evocative.
Effective.
Thanks!
|
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/16/10 at 01:28 PM Direct and nothing less than completely effective. I love it. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/16/10 at 07:57 PM I love the simplicity in this. You didn't gaudy this up with excessive verbosity to describe the most wonderful basic nature of man: attraction.Very well done, sir. :) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/16/10 at 09:39 PM What an astute and empathetic male observer! How many times I have walked downtown or through a restaurant window observed them walking by - too much focus on the legs - and never thought about the pain endured in simply walking. Your poem should be posted on restaurant windows with a sign above it: Ladies read this. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/17/10 at 05:21 AM Tis nothing so pretty as a pretty girl who doesn't know it! a lot said in so few words Vince! |
| Posted by Rachel Bennett on 01/18/10 at 02:40 AM I wish I had your gift of brevity, dude. This rocks. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/19/10 at 02:45 PM Been there, Vince; seen that; have dissolved heart to prove it..Simply fantastic poetry |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 01/19/10 at 10:39 PM Amazing, observant and true. smh |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/21/10 at 03:56 PM ...kewl. really! |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 01/26/10 at 07:55 PM I want to hear more, but enough has been said.
That's what perfection is I guess! :) |
