Crane Kick by V. Blakewith the kind of reckless abandon
that just screams, "Sweep the leg, Johnny!"
i turned this poem loose on the world.
i believe that all of its lines will find,
to their great dismay,
rather much in common with the Cobra Kai.
especially insofar as a single blow
can prove enough to drop either one flat.
but you know how it goes,
"If do right, no can defense."
story of my life, man. 01/03/2010 Author's Note: Poemuary entry #3, with ten minutes to spare.
Posted on 01/04/2010 Copyright © 2024 V. Blake
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/04/10 at 05:09 AM All I can say is, this poem is sassy!!! |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/04/10 at 05:31 AM Yes! I like poems that have an attitude about themselve a bit. Very cool, dude! |
Posted by Olivia Martin on 01/04/10 at 02:09 PM This was quite awesome. I liked the outside references coupled with the simple, "relateable" language and sentiment. Awesome write! |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/04/10 at 04:27 PM ...simply: i love your work, this is no exception, you put the English language on its head. touche! |
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 01/04/10 at 11:52 PM I was I had as much ten minute genius as you did. Nice job. |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/05/10 at 02:27 AM You're a genius. It must be amazing to be in your mind. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/05/10 at 02:36 AM Brilliant - encore... |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/05/10 at 08:15 AM Definitely shines!!!! I like this Vince!!! |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/09/10 at 05:23 AM Hated the movie (my kids couldn't see it enough). Loved your poem. Great work on a time crunch! |
Posted by Michael Defries on 01/22/10 at 01:17 PM Brilliant! Brilliant Sir! I applaud you, and bow. Thanks Sensei Blake |
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