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Flapping

by H.M Stevens

Like a child in a fortress made of sheets, I am buried layers

Turning every page, there are papers beyond my years and reach

Peeling backward- peddling to non-existance

A new mind surfaces. That which is absorbing, feeling and becoming at one time.
The ultimate perceiver, reveals ultimate truth

I have climbed trees, and many more to come
The ancient oak once seemed to grace the stars and tear into infinity
All of my time eternal

Looking in the mirror, everyday there was growth
my face morphed before me

I stood with my bare eleven year old chest, reminding myself-

This is the last time you'll look like a boy.

The moments marked by years- not, the four thousandth fifty third day there was breath

I gasp as I have, as
there was that one point where I emerged unknowingly; barely a being
Fresh behind my mother's placenta

Something simple.

Slowly my first sip, a fish in the wind

12/15/2009

Posted on 12/15/2009
Copyright © 2024 H.M Stevens

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by V. Blake on 12/15/09 at 06:33 AM

That is one of the most perfect opening lines I've read in some time. I always admire great opening lines, because I have such trouble with them myself. Kudos to you.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/18/09 at 05:05 AM

Excellent read! Love the buildup to that last incredible line. Thanks also for your comment on my latest.

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