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by V. Blake

Color TV fucked everything up.
My kids are only gonna get black and white.
So every night,
after they're done with their homework,
and they're sitting on their antigravity couches,
(And don't even get me started
on the goddamn antigravity couches)
and when there's a holy war on every channel,
at least my kids will be able to see
that all the angels and devils
bleed the same shade of gray.

12/08/2009

Author's Note: Also I will be poor.

Posted on 12/09/2009
Copyright © 2024 V. Blake

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by David Hill on 12/09/09 at 01:35 AM

Sharply written. It sounds like the near future. I like the angels and devils with gray blood. All the same.

Posted by Wayne Tate on 12/11/09 at 03:30 AM

I hope speechless counts as a compliment. Not being cryptic. It's just that good.

Posted by Traci Mabats on 12/29/09 at 01:38 AM

yup, last two lines are killer.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/17/10 at 01:35 PM

Isn't it ironic that now, if someone wants something to really stand out in a movie or television episode - they use black and white? Those last three lines make an especially solid impact. Thanks.

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