| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 12/05/09 at 10:31 PM i wish neither of us knew this feeling right now |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/05/09 at 11:40 PM I like how you described everything in here as a comfort but identify it as a struggle. You're more than half way there now. Good luck and don't turn back now. |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 12/05/09 at 11:55 PM sounds like you're well out of that one. never undervalue yourself and never settle for the status quo instead of happiness again. please. *gigantic hug* |
| Posted by V. Blake on 12/06/09 at 02:02 AM "I'm just getting really tired of trying to turn dirt into diamonds." Incredibly well said, and it's not out of place for that. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/06/09 at 04:13 PM ... so very brilliant..... |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 12/07/09 at 03:09 AM Sounds like he's one of the problems.... |
| Posted by Desdemona Sinestra on 12/10/09 at 04:26 AM i'm into it. =)
besides, a girl can never have too many problems. what else would we have to talk about? |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 12/10/09 at 05:07 AM I'm with Vince: the dirt into diamonds line sparkles, to coin a pun...but the whole poem succinctly tells the story of relationship failure and if i may say so, his loss |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 12/10/09 at 05:24 PM You say it all in the last line, stay true and stay strong. smh |
| Posted by Allison Smith on 12/12/09 at 02:20 PM Such a sad piece indeed :( |
| Posted by V. Blake on 12/16/09 at 06:15 AM I realized on rereading that I forgot to rate this. That has been remedied. :) |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/16/09 at 07:41 AM This is "in the moment" art as poetry! Such honesty in the emotions which reaches right in and pulls out the readers still beating heart! |
| Posted by William Brunk on 01/25/10 at 11:40 PM the authors note was a poem in itself.
a nice point on the edge of a monday sword..thanks |
| Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 01/26/10 at 06:02 AM Rawr. |
