Posted by Charlie Morgan on 12/05/09 at 08:41 PM ...signs, signs, everywhere signs...blocking the scenery, blocking my mind...george, this is so stylistic, so ooomphy, you cover the board on your keen perceptions, rather the poet who wrote this did...the poet kept me wonderfully taut as i kept [the/that lady--in mymind] how the poet was describing her...you started out as george then became the poet after the second line, like you always do. keen write. |