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Revengineering

by V. Blake

if
we
all
stand in
a circle
we'll
each
have
a back
to stab
V

11/20/2009

Posted on 11/20/2009
Copyright © 2024 V. Blake

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/21/09 at 12:39 PM

I love this image you've honed. It is not merely creative but it stabs at the imagination.

Posted by JD Clay on 11/22/09 at 01:07 AM

If this form of poetry has no name, I proclaim it Oroborous. I was immediately attracted to this poem for its brevity and candor. Good stuff!

Posted by Anita Mac on 11/11/10 at 05:55 AM

Mmhm... Clever. You should write more of these. ^_~

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